In Amercia, many houses need to be painted. Painting is not an easy work. Before you paint , you need to clear the place in which you want to paint. This is the most important thing you must to do. When you are painting, you should take your time. If you paint too quickly, your whole body be squrted. The paint should be well-mixed and your result will be beautiful. Following these steps, you will do a good job.
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Hello. Until I read your post, I think that painting house is almost painters'work because many people are not used to painting in our country and almost our house are made by wood. If I can paint my house by my self, I will enjoy painting and save money!! Thank you for telling us.
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ReplyDeleteIt is wonderful.
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It is not so good.
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In the third sentence, should use "clean" instead of " clear".
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ReplyDeleteI'm now interested in painting the house, because it's especially popular in U.S.A.
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It's better to put the sentence "the paint should be well-mixed" before the sentence "When you are painting, you should take your time". For example, how about "The impotant things you have to do are cleaning the place in which you want to paint and mix the paint well."
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I think you should change the first sentence to "In Amercia, many people paint their houses.